Week 7- Writing paper 2 (feeling)

Writing paper 2 was exciting for me because it was argumentative, and that's where I really thrive. I enjoy being able to take a strong stance and persuade the reader with clear reading and evidence. This style of writing gave me the space to get my point across confidently while showing my ability to build a solid, convincing argument.

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